amendations

The amendment was carefully considered by the majority in special meetings, when such amendations and improvements were agreed upon as would harmonize the action of the Republicans in the Senate.

History of the Thirty-Ninth Congress of the United States William Horatio Barnes

So, with a few amendations, to the panorama, it is possible to get a nice neat summary of what truly ails Hamastan other than sheer lunacy.

Sense of Events Daniel Jackson 2010

So, with a few amendations, to the panorama, it is possible to get a nice neat summary of what truly ails Hamastan other than sheer lunacy.

Sense of Events Daniel Jackson 2010

I don't know how much of that was done with the involvement of an editor, but this example, as well as a number of books by other authors that have been printed with facsimile manuscript showing deletions and amendations, indicate that at least some percentage of Chinese literature passes through multiple drafts.

Chinalyst - China blogs in English 2009