Raimon

Raimon is very important – I will make him more interesting.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

Even Father Raimon is not sure what all of the patterns and lettering mean – although he is more than familiar with Ceremonial Magic, as it is called.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

Punctuality pleases the Cardinal – and Raimon is always punctual.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

The first trait introduced about Raimon is that he’s punctual.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

He smiles at Raimon, calm and collected as ever – pausing in their conversation to take out a key and slip in into the panel of the lift – only then does Raimon press the lowest button on the panel.

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Always ready, Raimon pulls out a folder, handing it over to the Cardinal.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

It might be more interesting to present the technician as the POV here – he probably has a more interesting perspective and goal than Raimon does.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

Vieri hands the paperwork back to Raimon, with a nod.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

The paragraph beginning with “he smiles at Raimon …” has 170 words.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009

Raimon has not been trusted with the spells – yet.

Superhero Nation: how to write superhero novels and comic books » Thablue’s Review Forum 2009